Miles to go before I sleep...

Sunday, May 22, 2005

Awakening

Her arms around Him, She hugging around his back,
They talking a gamut of things under the sun,

- Suddenly he was woken up by his 5 year old kid born out of His marriage.

18 Comments:

Blogger dinesh said...

Ada Ada Ada,

Idhu enna "Kaadhal" vaaram a ? Orey Love talkings a irukku ? Adhuvum Ammani range la oru post potrukkaye da prabhu !

Good one !

12:58 PM  
Blogger DR said...

Sweet nothingsnu naan oru blog ezhutha irundein... aana nee adhulla paadhi concept a eduthuta
:( anyway, gr8 job!

2:12 PM  
Blogger Narayanan Venkitu said...

I can understand this very well.!! I have 2 daughters 10 and 5.!

2:50 PM  
Blogger P B said...

yes unfulfilled desires appear in dreams!

11:01 PM  
Blogger Maayaa said...

enna sindhanaiyoo, enna sogamo!!!! malarum ninavigal..

athu seri, enna lex blogsla ore love loveaaa vizhuthu..athuvum unga blogla rombave!!!!

12:13 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I know who that she is. Let us know few things that u spoke with her so that she can share them with her husband.

12:50 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ulaga Thathuvam 1001 !

Adutha Episode-la Pethiya Paakalam-nu sollu ...

Makkal nalla eruntha Migavum thripthi!

-Vasu

7:33 AM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

venkitu ( also vasu and virumandi),
am nots ure if u got it right.
he was dreaming and it was about his ex-lover. he was woken up by his kid of HIS marriage.
not sure if u got that right :)

8:10 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Prabhu,

Once again, nicely written. But again I donno if the word pun on 'out of marriage' was coincidental or intented. That gives another tone to the poem !

(For the uninitiated, 'out of marriage' and 'out of wedlock' refers to children born before one's marriage.)

11:32 AM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Dinesh - "Ammani range la" -- nalla velai ammani namma blog pakkam ellam varathu illa :) (thookku thaan aporam). Appreciate anyways.

DR - "Sweet nuthings" hmmm sounds interesting.

Muthu - Definitely, I agree totally!

Priya - Cinema maari than blog um. Love illama padam ethavthu odumaa, antha mari nnu vachukkoyen!

5:28 PM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Anon - onnume pirilla ba!

Sathish - "
(For the uninitiated, 'out of marriage' and 'out of wedlock' refers to children born before one's marriage.)"

I got what u meant, but I didnt think that way! Thanq though.

5:32 PM  
Blogger The Doodler said...

Good try, Prabhu! Appreciate your effort at something different!

7:28 AM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

nandri subha!
appreciate your appreciation.

12:27 PM  
Blogger ammani said...

I'm not sure if I got what was intended. But good read, all the same. I tend to favour short posts, as you might've guess ;)Thanks for coming by.

4:30 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

enna ksp
next blogaa kaanum???

8:21 PM  
Blogger Badri said...

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4:54 AM  
Blogger Badri said...

Thank god you scribbled this.. your previous blogs worried me. It's time for mid-life crisis and you were almost suffering from prolonged adoloscence :D

4:55 AM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Ammani - nandri and Thanks for stopping by.

badri - yaa mid-life crisis stage la thaan irukken!

8:32 AM  

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