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Friday, June 10, 2005

Friendship - Winds of Change

Gangadhar was married happily to Revathy for 3 years. Gangadhar had a really close long time friend, Amitabh who also became a very good friend of Revathy. Three of them went together all the places and talked endlessly on every topic that could interest them. Amitabh's feelings towards Revathy was that of a genuine friend - no adulterations, no inclinations. The three of them went on a holy trip to Kashi once. The Ganges was surprisingly turbulent when they had a dip in her. They went pretty deep inside the river and felt Ganges indeed had the miraculous cleansing power. "Helpppp......" screamed a mother scurryingly attempting to save her 4 year old son carried away by the river. Gangadhar looked to his right and the kid was within 30 feet from him. He dived into the fast flowing river trying to save the kid.

Revathy was sobbing inconsolably. It had been 3 weeks and there were no traces of him. The police found the 4 year old kid the same evening washed away, but they could not find Gangadhar. Amitabh was trying everything within his realms of possibility and nothing had helped so far.

8 years since that incident happened, Gangadhar had taken to spirituality and that day he could not believe his eyes. In the streets of Kashi, he saw Revathy and Amitabh with 2 kids. He was so happy that day. "Thank God, Thank God" he repeated. "Thanks for providing just the logical solution to Revathy's life. After all not everything defies logic", he mumbled.
He did not want Revathy or Amitabh to spot him. He could remain out of guilt just this one day. The guilt that he decided to save his life ahead of the 4 year old kid when the currents were just too strong for him to plunge and save the kid.

5 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Amitabh's and/or Revathy's guilt is missing here!

That thing would be the gist of the story ...

-Vasu

12:48 PM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Amitabh and Revathy's relationship was an imminent one. Only if they had feared for the society would it be inappropriate - atleast according to me.
Ofcourse both of them would have felt bad that they couldnt find Gangadhar ( I didnt want to dwelve on those), but life still has to move on.

1:51 PM  
Blogger expertdabbler said...

Prabhu,

Not much details overrall...

All of a sudden "Eight years passed and Gangadhar had taken to spirituality...." is a bit too jarring..

Maybe you wanted to keep it or short.

One suggestion:
Maybe trying to tell the story from one perspective would help and make it a bit more detailed(albeit longer) would help?

i am not sure, just a question...

btw whatever is happening to your friend dinesh?

2:46 AM  
Blogger The Doodler said...

Hmmm..Gangadhar takes to spirituality because of not saving the child? I concur with Prabhu Karthik. Seems a bit on the extreme side to me. Vasu, Why would Amitabh or Revathy feel guilty?! I don't see any problem with their decision..

12:01 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

It was a selfish decision by Mr. Gang. He was probably guilty but did he not think about Revathy's plight? He must be the most selfish person ever.

11:57 AM  

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