Miles to go before I sleep...

Friday, May 19, 2006

Her Birthday

Its that time of the year. Spring is almost on its way out and enter Summer. This last week, everyday he woke up - he thought "Its another day nearer". She likes getting surprised, especially if its him. That makes the job all the more harder for him. Every birthday he starts to plan on her birthday gift weeks before the actual date. Over time he understood his gift to her need not cost him his bi-weekly paycheck, it doesnt need to be a bouquet of red roses and a candle-lit dinner, but it needs his personal touch. The gift is more a sentimental value than a face value. The harder part is keeping it a secret from her, the harder part is to get away from her by lying - "I got to meet this ooolld classmate", throw tantrums like - "I am sick, Will you leave me alone this evening?". Finally when the day arrives, and he reveals the gift to her, she would go ecstatic about the gift. She would tell all her friends, all her cousins, her mom/dad, his mom/dad and make everyone envious. She loved him even more.

But this year it is a lot different and this birthday is a lot harder for him. This year, he has all the time away from her but then he need not plan on her birthday, make the effort for the gift. Will she be expecting his birthday message? Should he leave an offliner wishing her on the birthday? Will she reply back? Will she be happy to see his message? He thinks about the hard times they endured the past year, the broken olive branch and then closes his eyes decidedly. As always he decides he didn't want her to feel unhappy, especially on her birthday. He did not to send her a birthday message.

Miles away... she wonders - "Will he send me a birthday wish?".

26 Comments:

Blogger dinesh said...

Polandhutte da !

4:39 PM  
Blogger rajesh said...

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6:06 PM  
Blogger rajesh said...

Pinnita da !

6:06 PM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Rendu perum senthu aaga motham oattiteenga! :(

6:26 PM  
Blogger Zeppelin said...

machan one of the best 'short' stories i read in recent times... not that i walked from library to library and borrowed all possible short stories available OR jump from blog to blog and read all 'short' stories there...

to cut a long story short, nejamave kalakitte da..!! nice post man !

7:41 PM  
Blogger Archana said...

Personal experience :-)? Nice story!

8:02 PM  
Blogger RS said...

Sweet. Feel panni ezhudirka madiri irundudu :)

12:13 AM  
Blogger kuttichuvaru said...

gud one!! personal experience-aa??

10:32 AM  
Blogger Maayaa said...

kalakitta prabhu!!!

11:19 AM  
Blogger Butterflies said...

aahaaaa..prabhu...ennatha solla...jus lovely....human emotions!!!...too gud...wish panna...who knows olive branch ottumo enna mo!

3:22 PM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Zeppelin,
Nandri Hai! Sincerely appreciate.

Archana,
Thanks. Personal experience ellam illa...thankfully :)
Ramya,
Was talking to you about your short story right? Thought I should also write one.
Kutti,
Nope - not personal experience and thanq.
Priya,
Thanq Thanq, nee stop by pannathe periya visheyam :)

Shuba,
Thanks much. I sincerely dont believe in tying together a broken olive branch.

3:38 PM  
Blogger expertdabbler said...

idhu short story!:)
superb man

6:05 AM  
Blogger P B said...

pichita prabhu..sooper.

8:35 AM  
Blogger monu said...

hey nice one!!
:)

9:00 AM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Prabhu Karthik - hey thanks!
"Idhu thaan short story" nu solratha paatha - dinesh oda 'short' story a thuppara maadhiri irukke!

PB - thanks man!

Monu - hey, thanks!

Makkale -- "True story-a? True Story-a? nu kettu veetla dont make me get weird looks from my family :(

12:04 PM  
Blogger dinesh said...

Prabhu - Potti irukkalaam ! Poraamai irukka koodaadhu ! :)

10:52 AM  
Blogger BZ said...

Dumb boys! ;) Adhan.
I can quote experiences like this. When will guys ever understand?! ;)

Very nicely written buddy.

1:45 PM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Dinesh - unkooda enaku poattiyum illa, poramaiyum illa. Unga kooda ellaam potti poda mudiyuma? Nee yaaru, un range enna...

Saranya -- Dumb guys a?? I think this is one feeling that even girls are not excluded. I think the story will 'fit like a T' even if the characters (he/she) are switched in my story.

Anyways - once again, Idhu unmai sambavam ila - so some feelings might just be exaggerated.

5:54 PM  
Blogger Shilpa said...

Wow...very nice story and very well written too Prabhu !

8:35 PM  
Blogger Viji said...

kalakkittinga... nachunnu irukku!
idhellam adhuva dhan varudhu illa... :)

5:20 AM  
Blogger Prabhu said...

Shilpa,
Thanq, appreciate!

Viji,
thanks ma. u getting too busy to blog these days?

Word of caution all:::

Thevai illaama its a "goood story', 'nice writing" nu comment panitteenga. This might encourage my inner self to write more stories like these (although I am trying my best not to, for all yours sake :)

4:34 PM  
Blogger Enigma said...

very touching story.
it always happens in a relationship

12:21 PM  
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